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Breakaway - Avon Gale

"You like both?" Lane asked enviously, and she giggled again. He liked her a lot, but if she came to his with him, he'd just want to watch a movie or something. But he enjoyed looking at her, and she smelled nice, which was a change from hanging out with a bunch of hockey players. It was all very confusing." 

  1. Why "enviously"? Oh right, the author is bisexual (sorry to disappoint, but not every gay guy is envious of the bi community). *rolls eyes so hard*
  2. Can someone please explain to me what exactly is so "very confusing" here?
  3. Please tell me the writing will improve throughout the rest of the book/series?